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P&P coverThe first six passages quoted on Twitter from @sueannbowling from June 6 through June 12, 2013 were from Pride and Prejudice, by Jane Austen. Spellings are from the Oxford University Press edition.

“I am not afraid, for though I am the youngest, I am the tallest.” Lydia, after her mother says that she thinks Bingley will dance with her at the next ball. (This is before anyone but Mr. Bennett has even seen Bingley.)

“Affectation of candour is common enough;–one meets it everywhere.” Elizabeth speaking to Jane after the first ball, commenting on her sister’s ability to see everyone in the best light.

“In nine cases out of ten, a woman had better shew more affection that she feels.” Charlotte Lucas to Elizabeth as they are discussing Jane’s liking for Bingley, which is well concealed.

“Nothing is more deceitful than the appearance of humility.” Darcy, commenting on Bingley’s writing so rapidly that his handwriting is unreadable.

“The power of doing anything with quickness is always much prized by the possessor.” Darcy to Bingley, later in the same conversation.

“We can all plague and punish one another.” Elizabeth to Caroline Bingley, after Darcy makes a remark about their walking about the room together.

“They’ll be more than happy to take good Confederation credits.” Sue Ann Bowling, “Horse Power.” Roi has been wondering where he could rent a bicycle, and Amber is pointing him to the mechanic’s shop across the street.

Pride and Prejudice blogfestcover, Mr. Darcy's DiaryMr. Darcy’s Diary is a retelling of Pride and Prejudice from Darcy’s point of view. It does not have as much of a “diary” feel to it as Georgiana Darcy’s Diary, as a real diary would not do a very good job of recording dialog, but as a first person novel with dates indicated (and with the narrator unaware of anything past those dates) it works very well.

It is close to Pride and Prejudice as far as those scenes which mirror those Jane Austen wrote. The scenes with both Darcy and Elizabeth mostly retain the Austen dialog, and the additional scenes in the overlapping time period are mostly those strongly hinted at in the original—Lady Catherine’s descent on Darcy after seeing Elizabeth, for instance. It starts slightly earlier than Pride and Prejudice, with Wickham’s attempt to seduce Georgiana, and continues on for about six months after Austen’s novel ends. I found the extra scenes at the end one of the less satisfying parts of the novel, but I have to say that as a whole it is a very enjoyable read.

Next month I think I will have to reread the original Pride and Prejudice, if only to get my head straight on exactly what Jane Austen herself wrote. After that, I think I will reread what has so far been my favorite retelling from Darcy’s point of view, Pamela Aidan’s Fitzwilliam Darcy, Gentleman.

Review of Pride and Prejudice (DVD)

Pride and Prejudice blogfestThe first time I watched this, the version with Kiera Knightly, I thought it came off rather poorly compared to the BBC version with Colin Firth. The second time, I liked it better, but while it generally stays close to the original book, there still seemed something a little off. Then I watched the movie with the commentary by the director (Joe Wright), and had an “aha!” moment.

DVD cover, Pride and PrejudiceI had always read the book – and I think Jane Austin wrote it – with Elizabeth totally hostile to Darcy at the time of his initial proposal. It seemed to me that the change in her attitude did not even start until the second time she read his letter – and then it took a long time to really sink in.

In this version, the director assumed that Elizabeth was actually attracted to Darcy at the time he first proposed to her, and refused him from pride and a bit of temper. I was watching from my understanding of the book, and when that clashed with the way the actors were playing their parts, l had a hard time following. I need to set it aside for a while and perhaps watch it again.

I was a little bothered by Lady Catherine showing up at the Bennett home late at night and the family all meeting her in their sleeping attire. Would this really have happened at this time of history? Would not a servant have opened the door, rather than Mr. Bennett?

All in all, this was an excellent movie, even if it did depart somewhat from the book.

Darcy's Decision book coverIt is a truth universally acknowledged that a prequel should at least lead to the possibility of the original book. At least I thought it was universally acknowledged. Darcy’s Decision, by Maria Grace, had me wondering.

Granted, this book is part of a series and I thought the next book might clear things up. But in Pride and Prejudice Darcy’s change of heart, though not really explained, is brought about in some way by Elizabeth. Here a clergyman causes considerable reformation before Darcy even meets Elizabeth. Wickham is certainly a villain and his conduct in this book, though appalling, is in line with the character sketched out by Jane Austin. But the plot development seemed to make his further flirtations next to impossible.

I went ahead and got the second book in the Given Good Principles series, The Future Mrs. Darcy, simply because I was curious as to how on earth the writer was going to get herself out of the corner she had written herself into in a way that made the Jane Austin plot possible. After I read the second book, I started to realize this was never intended to be a prequel. Rather, Ms. Grace has taken the characters and the initial setup of Pride and Prejudice and written her own story. Not a prequel, not a change in point of view, not a sequel, but a “what if?” What if Darcy had been forced to see his selfishness before he ever met Elizabeth? What if Lydia’s flirtatiousness had been recognized earlier? At this point the series has been written out to the point that Darcy and Elizbeth have just met — and not at a ball.

Still, I have few hopes that this series will be anything like as good as Pamela Aidan’s Fitzwilliam Darcy, Gentleman series.

Pride and Prejudice blogfestOne of the things this book has forced me to recognize is that there are a number of kinds of books based on Pride and Prejudice. I’ve categorized them (for the moment) as:
1. Non-fiction. This can include scholarly critiques, biographies of Jane Austin, and books about her times, which can be helpful in defining words such as squabs (carriage cushions) or the difference between a curricle and a chaise.
2. Prequel. Books whose main action is before the action of Pride and Prejudice. I haven’t read one, but a book about the marriage of Darcy’s parents, or of Elizabeth’s early life, would certainly qualify.
3. Pride and Prejudice from a different point of view. There are a number from Darcy’s POV, and of course the movie versions are almost of necessity from an omniscient point of view. I haven’t come across versions from other points of view such as Bingley’s, Mary’s, Wickham’s, or those of other characters such as Lady Catherine de Burgh, but they’re certainly possible. Maybe this challenge will help me find some!
4. Same time period, same characters, different story. The Given Good Principles series falls into this category, and so does Lost in Austin.
5. Sequel. This and 3 are the largest categories. Sequels can be straightforward, mysteries (I have several of those), paranormal (sometimes combined with mystery) or for all I know science fiction or any other genre you can think of. Sequels from different points of view exist, too; I’ve just started reading Georgiana Darcy’s Diary, which starts with Darcy and Elizabeth already married and a house party that makes me shudder. (Mrs. Bennett and Lady Catherine are both guests.)

I’m not even going to count romances where the characters start out misunderstanding each other; that’s become a plot element too common to catalog.

Henceforth I’ll try to determine what category a book belongs in before writing a review!

Blog Challenges

Oh frabjous day! Callooh! Callay! The sun is back; I actually saw it out of my south windows!

Sun

Pardon the chain link; the gate was so frozen in place after the weekend’s thaw I couldn’t open it.

No, I’m not quite crazy; having the sun rise high enough that its beams make it through the trees on the south horizon is as much a promise of spring as the seed catalogs arriving in the mail. If you want some proof of my craziness, I’ve just signed up for my third blogfest of the year. And the dates of the first two are rapidly approaching.

Snake blog hop logoFirst (in terms of when I signed up) is the Year of the Snake. On February 10, 2013, we pass from the year of the Dragon to the Year of the Snake. The challenge is: “Find within your work a passage that embodies the spirit of the snake as defined above. You are encouraged to include a giveaway, but it’s not required. Snakes would find you foolish, but I won’t.” Well, that’s Sunday, and while Six Sentence Sunday will be gone, I’ll still be posting bits of my work. I’m planning to take Wendy Russo (who’s hosting the hop) a bit more literally than she probably intended, but as it happens the work I’ve been selecting bits from does have an appropriate passage.

World Building logoThen I couldn’t resist the World Building Blogfest, though it will probably mean double posts on some days. That one’s five days, from January 28 through February 1, with posts on the world you’ve built in your fiction. For me it’ll be worlds, and some of the challenges are going to be “It varies according to which planet you’re on,” with examples. The challenges are:

Post #1 – 1/28 – History & Government
Post #2 – 1/29 – Religion & Culture
Post #3 – 1/30 – Food & Drink
Post #4 – 1/31 – Geography & Climate
Post #5 – 2/1 – Demonstrating world-building in an excerpt

#1 and #3 will be double post days; #5 will be an episode of Jarn’s Journal. I need to get busy writing the other four.

Pride and Prejudice blogfestThe new one, today, is the Pride and Prejudice Bicentenary Challenge. The idea is to read (or watch) and blog on a number of books and/or videos connected with Jean Austin’s masterpiece. Now I am not generally a romance reader (the modern ones are a little too explicit for my taste) but I adore Jane Austin. I even used Pride and Prejudice and two spin-offs in a post I wrote about point of view. One is allowed to choose one to twelve pieces, so at most this will involve one post a month. I already had nine books that I thought would qualify (not counting the five I used in the point-of-view post) so while it’s a little early to identify which book goes on which day, I will be blogging about one of these books, or others on my TBR list, on (usually) the second Tuesday of each month.

The ones I have are:
The Unpleasantness at Scargrave Manor (Stephanie Barron)
Darcy’s Story (Janet Aylmer)
The History of England from the reign of Henry the 4th to the death of  Charles the 1st (Jane Austin)
The Jane Austin Handbook: A Sensible Yet Elegant Guide to Her World (Margaret C. Sullivan)
Jane Austin and Her Times, 1775-1817 (G. E. Mitton)
Pride and Prescience (Carrie Bebris)
Suspense and Sensibility (Carrie Bebris)
The Matters at Mansfield (Carrie Bebris)
Death Comes to Pemberley (P. D. James)

The post hosting the blog and its comments have already suggested several others, and I’ve added to my iPad:
Georgiana Darcy’s Diary (Anne Elliott)
Mr. Darcy’s Diary (Amanda Grange)
Darcy’s Decision (Maria Grace)

I’ll be watching others’ reviews for what else to add. I have some DVD’s in mind, too, so my reviews will be back, at least occasionally.

“It is a truth universally acknowledged, that a single man in possession of a good fortune, must be in want of a wife.”

So begins one of the most enduring and enjoyable of English novels.  Over two centuries have passed since it was first written, and very little less since it was published.  It is a comedy of manners, and those manners are very far from today’s – but the human interactions and perplexities remain as strong as ever.  Derivatives have been rewritten on everything from murder mysteries to zombies to time travel. There are of course different editions of the original work or commentaries on it, but there are also sequels, plays, videos, retellings and even a paper doll.

I have recently been indulging in the original novel and two of the derivative works: the DVD of the BBC dramatization and a trilogy by Pamela Aidan of a retelling of the story from Darcy’s point of view.  The three versions give an interesting demonstration of the importance of point of view.

The original book is primarily focused on Elizabeth’s point of view.  It is not a tight point of view; Mr. Collins sneaks out to court Charlotte, Bingley’s sisters talk about Elizabeth behind her back, and even Darcy’s emotions are made clear to the reader long before Elizabeth has any hint that he considers her anything but a nuisance.  But in general the reader is not told much that Elizabeth does not know, and there is no scene without a woman present.

The dramatization follows the book quite closely, even to most of the dialogue being taken word for word from the book. Some changes, such as Darcy’s swim (Jane Austin certainly never thought of his meeting Elizabeth at Pemberley dripping wet) are minor, but the scenes immediately following discovery of Lydia’s elopement produce a definite shift toward a more distant and omniscient point of view.  In the book, the reader is encouraged to think, with Elizabeth, that Darcy wants nothing more to do with the family.  In the dramatization, the viewer follows Darcy to London and knows long before Lydia lets it slip that Darcy, far from withdrawing himself from the contamination of Elizabeth’s family, has humbled himself to bribe the man he hates most to marry Lydia.  The effect is a switch to a more omniscient point of view.

The Aidan trilogy, Fitzwilliam Darcy, Gentleman, is written using a tighter limited omniscient point of view than the original novel, but this time the character followed is Darcy.  The first book, An Assembly Such as This, follows most of Volume I of Pride and Prejudice.  As far as the scenes in which Darcy and Elizabeth both appear, there is little difference in what happens, though of course the interpretations are quite different.  Three new characters are introduced early, but only one, Darcy’s valet Fletcher, is human.  (The other two are Darcy’s horse and the young hound he is training.)  The last two chapters of the first Aidan book are concerned with Darcy’s attempts to distract Bingley from Jane in London.  Here Fletcher comes into his own in a sartorial rivalry–quite unanticipated on Darcy’s part–with Beau Brummel.  I suspect the major purpose of the author is to depict the shallowness and degeneracy of the group that would be considered Darcy’s social equals, and to point out that Darcy is aware of and disgusted by their behavior.  Other new characters introduced in this book are of minor importance, though some become critical later and at least one, Lord Dyfed Brougham, turns out to be an important character in Darcy’s recognition of his own selfishness.

The second Aidan book, Duty and Desire, covers the period between Darcy’s separation of Bingley from Jane and his visit to Rosings.  Elizabeth appears only through Darcy’s infatuation–which he is trying his best to overcome.  He must have an heir, and Pemberley must have a mistress.  He actively seeks a wife, hoping to put Elizabeth out of his head.  Darcy’s interaction with his sister in the first third of the book, together with the later house party, make his eventual proposal to Elizabeth at Rosings more believable, though it is not until the third book that he finally acts on his infatuation.    (I cannot help but wonder if Ms. Aidan saw the PBS special, Regency House Party, as that certainly ties into the last two-thirds of the second book.)  But the Aidan book is otherwise quite unconnected to the Austen original.

The third book, These Three Remain, covers the second half of Pride and Prejudice, from the arrival at Rosings of Darcy and his cousin, the proposal, and most important, and totally left out of the Austen original, Darcy’s struggle with himself which leads him “to see himself as others see him”. By the time he meets Elizabeth again, at Pemberley, his change is convincing enough that we can follow him to London and his bribery of Wickham to marry Lydia with some degree of belief. After this, the trilogy gradually returns to the original novel, though I greatly enjoyed the scene where Lady Catherine confronts Darcy at his town house.

By itself, the trilogy would not compete with Jane Austen’s novel.  It does, however, complement it, as does the dramatization.

All in all, the novel and the two derivative works form an interesting demonstration of how different points of view can make different stories of the same events.