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Roi’s hang glider has been misbehaving, and in trying to straighten it out he has triggered a screamer which effectively negates his esper abilities.
Even a tight mental shield couldn’t stop the pain in his head entirely, and levitation and teleportation were no longer even remotely possible. Whoever was responsible for the sabotage had intended for the glider to kill him. Any normal telepath, raised to depend on esper talents, probably would have panicked.
Roi, however, had been conditioned from birth to find ways of dealing with impossible situations without betraying his esper abilities. His involuntary start had thrown the glider into another tumble, and his helmet speaker was raucous with cries of alarm from the others. “Shut up and keep clear,” he snarled in response as he struggled to get the scarlet wing flying again. Somehow he leveled off heading more or less toward the orange roof, though he was too low now to make the distance without a thermal, and too wary of the blood-colored wing to trust his ability to circle in an updraft for height. The ground below was studded with boulders and cut by gullies, and looked almost as hostile as the suddenly unfriendly sky.
I think he’s finally realized he’s in real trouble.
The blurb:
A vacation with his three best friends from slavery and a manhood challenge: Roi is given the graduation present he has dreamed of. Dogsledding, hang gliding, a chance to see Pleistocene animals transplanted to a Terraformed vacation world, horseback riding, sailing … all the sports he has returned to with his recovery from paralysis, and a few new ones to learn.
They’re prepared for danger from weather, wild animals and extreme sports. But none of them realize that Roi’s half brother Zhaim, determined to recover his old position as Lai’s heir, intends to kill them if he can—and he’s decided that the dangers of the trip will make a perfect cover for his schemes.
How long will it take them to realize that the “accidents” they keep running into are more than just accidents?
Tourist Trap, the second novel of the Jarnian Confederation, won first place in science fiction and fiction book of the year in the 2011 Reader Views contest.
Reviewers say:
“Fans of Sue Ann Bowling’s novel Homecoming will not be disappointed with its sequel. Tourist Trap returns the reader to the world of the Jarnian Confederation—to Roi, Lai, Marna, and all of their friends and relations. The author does a stellar job of bringing these characters to life, allowing the reader to not only see their actions but to understand the culture and politics that motivate them. (ForeWord Clarion review)
“Tourist Trap” is a great read for anyone that wants motivation and feeling to accompany the action in their sci-fi adventure. Alien beings and super powers are an integral part of Roi’s story but what makes this novel really shine is the heart. Nobody is good or evil just because that’s their assigned role. Just like in real life, everyone has their own motivations and desires, and Bowling does a great job of letting the reader see what it would be like to walk in the shoes of Roi, Xazhar, and even madman Zhaim. (ReaderViews review)
Homecoming (iUniverse, 2011) is available from:
iUniverse http://bookstore.iuniverse.com/Products/SKU-000188494/Tourist-Trap.aspx
Barnes and Noble http://www.barnesandnoble.com/w/tourist-trap-sue-ann-bowling/1104199464
Amazon http://www.amazon.com/Tourist-Trap-Sue-Ann-Bowling/dp/1462029582/
in dust jacket, trade paper, and e-book formats.
Whew, at least he’s figured out the glider problems aren’t coincidences, and are major. You’ve had me worried about Roi for weeks now! 🙂
He’s not down yet.
Dynamite eight. You never let me down with your imagination and gift of expression.
Glad you like it.
Pretty tough decisions he’s facing, but at least he currently has things under control. Can’t wait for next week!
Currently.
With all that going on, I’m sure he knows he’s in trouble. I think he should stay in the air, provided his glider will allow that. Nice 8!
That’s a big provided.
Oh wow, I’m pulling for a miracle for him…I hope he gets one!
He’s going to have to save himself, this time.
You’ve set him up well tangled, but you’ve also given him the tools he needs to survive—this is what makes you a terrific storyteller, Sue Ann (this and worldbuilding, of course).
Just wish I could get the word out (and a few more reviews.)
I know what you mean about getting the word out. What a great snippet–I enjoy reading about how Roi deals with the trouble.
Roi’s a survivor. But that doesn’t mean he always makes the right choices.
Excellent! I flew through it. Really tense scene, yet you’ve managed to infuse information without bogging down the pace. Well done, Sue Ann! He’s in a heap of trouble. When he gets out of this one, bet someone else is in a heap of trouble.
Quite literally, you’ve left us hanging 🙂
Well at least he’s keeping his head, trying to figure something out. The description of the ground below is pretty daunting! Another excellent excerpt…I love your little hints in the comments of more problems ahead!
He’s pretty good at keeping his head up to a point.
Roi seems pretty smart, even in this incredibly difficult situation! I’m sure he’ll figure something out. Your powers of description bring this scene to life, Sue Ann. Looking forward to the next excerpt!
Oh, he’s smart, all right.
Very tense scene!
Glad you liked it.
Intriguing!
And a bit worrisome, I hope.
How scary, I hope he can manage to stay away from that threatening terrain. Action packed 8.
We shall see.
Dang this saboteur and their thoroughness!
Hope no one else gets too close to Roi–that could make this situation so much worse…
Right.
Tourist Trap (iUniverse, 2011) is available from:iUniverse http://bookstore.iuniverse.com/Products/SKU-000188494/Tourist-Trap.aspx Barnes and Noble http://www.barnesandnoble.com/w/tourist-trap-sue-ann-bowling/1104199464 Amazon http://www.amazon.com/Tourist-Trap-Sue-Ann-Bowling/dp/1462029582/ in dust jacket, trade paper, and e-book formats.
Eep!! He IS in trouble. Poor guy! Looking forward to seeing more of his ability.
He’s going to need some quick thinking.