Welcome back to War’s End. Ginger is trying to free Kelty, Madame Irela is sitting on a log, Bounce is off hunting for Audi, and Coralie’s survival training is kicking in. If you want more details, click “Index” above, and then “Six Sentence Sunday.”
Survival training? What we get in the segments on the weather report is seven steps: Recognition that you’re in a survival situation, inventory of what you have with you, shelter (including clothing), water, food, signals, and play. The signals don’t apply: they’re in enemy territory. This last is not new to Coralie; she’s spent the last 8 years in a war. But she’s reached shelter, water, and food–and she’s realizing that the methods she knows for determining what’s safe to eat won’t work here.
But how could she trust what the local animals ate when the local animals–if there were any larger than the insects–were totally unfamiliar? Even binding things against her skin as a preliminary test seemed dubious, given Kelty’s plight.
“The survival kit should have a few emergency bars,” Ginger replied as she soaked Kelty’s hand with alcohol. “Catching rainwater’s a good idea, and so’s shelter–but I don’t know quite how.”
“We should get out of this clearing, as soon as we’re all together and Kelty’s free,” Coralie said. “We don’t want to be visible from satellites, do we?”
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So they have satellites to worry about, too? There’s tech on this planet?
I’m fascinated by your world-building!
This is one of the three primary worlds in the trilogy: Central, Horizon, and Rakal. Rakal has been taken over by an alien species.
Satellites? Is someone after them? I like how you continue to develop Coralie’s character. Nice six!
Someone certainly is!
And the tension keeps on mounting! I really want to know who might be searching for them via satellite now. They certainly have a lot of problems to contend with. Great six.
That’s covered earlier. I’m working with a professional editor on the first book (this is the third) now. Getting that done’s my November goal.
I’m still hoping to get the books out someday. Of course if anyone’s interested in a beta read ….
I’m intrigued by the world you’re building. Great six!
Thanks. Incidentally, I’ll be slow getting around today. Our local critique group meets this afternoon (it’s 8:30 am here) and I still have to comment on 7 10-p mss.
How cool, someone must be after them? Can’t wait to read more. Great Six!
Cool for the reader, maybe. Not so cool for them!
This most definitely adds another layer of tension. Well done!
Nothing that wasn’t addressed before in the book, but it’s new to the snippets.
She’s wise to be cautious. Good six, Sue Ann.
I’m basically doing a single scene from a subplot.
She’s learned in a hard school.
It’s amazing to me inagoodway how much plot has been covered and yet they’re still in that clearing! I feel like the adventures have been moving along at a pretty fast clip – hope this new wrinkle of satellites doesn’t bring them too much trouble. Excellent excerpt!
Don’t think they’ll get out until after the last Six Sentence Sunday.
Satellites to worry about— they sure have their problems. Great six.
They just dropped (or were teleported) out the the frying pan, and they’re not sure yet whether they’ve landed in the fire.
Interesting snippet
Thanks.
Wow! So many things going on! Love her common sense approach to everything! 🙂
That’s the kind of person she is.
I like her leader instincts and qualities!
She knows more about wilderness survival than the others, and she is beginning to realize that.
I love her survival instincts and I’m really curious about the satellites.
They’re in a wilderness area, but the planet has been colonized and then taken over.
Nice. Looking forward to your next six 🙂
They’re all scheduled.
Wow. Being tracked (or trackable) by satellites certainly adds a wrinkle. I don’t envy them one bit!
Coralie’s being just a bit paranoid here–but she has good reasons to be.