Once again I’m posting from War’s End, a continuation from last week. Coralie has now heard most of the others from the ship, but she can’t see them, and she still has no idea of where they are or how they got there.
Cautiously she [Coralie] got to her feet. The ground was soft, but felt solid underneath the surface goo.
“Madame Irela?” Kelty called.
“Here. Is everyone else in this bog, too?”
“In or over, I think.”
Over? Where is he?
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Great dialogue exchange 😀
They can’t see each other, so voices is it.
Ew… surface goo? And, I’m curious about “over” – are they dangling in the air? Very intriguing!
They’re in a swamp. Tune in next week.
Over? That’s curious. I’ll certainly be back next week to find out what he means.
😉
Sounds like they still have a mess to work out. Nice six.
Oh, they have lots to work out.
Intriguing six, especially the ‘in or over’ response.
Next week.
surface goo? Great six! Fantastic dialogue 🙂 can’t wait for next week…
It’s lined up. I’m thinking of the section I’ve been taking bits of for a reading in class next week.
I’m hoping there are not “things” in the bog….
They’re hoping so too. (Aside from the insects which they already know about.)
Still as mysterious as ever – it reminds of me of the classic “Twilight Zone” kind of atmosphere inagoodway – very shivery and you sure worry about the characters – well done! Another tantalizing six…
Do you shiver when it’s that hot?
Wow–“goo” and “Bog” and not being able to see each other. I love scifi! I will be back to read more. 🙂 Nice six, Sueann. 🙂
My scifi is very personality based–whether or not the people are human.
Enjoyed the dialogue…and the mention of surface goo was a great detail to set the scene 🙂
They still can’t see each other or identify the direction the voices are coming from.
Terribly intriguing… I wonder what is happening here. Well done! 🙂
They’ve found themselves on a strange planet with no idea of how they got there. Six Sentence Sunday in the index has links to all of the previous posts from War’s End.
Exciting stuff, great dialogue!
Thanks. I pretty much let the dialogue write itself, given the situation.
Sometimes six sentences just aren’t enough. this is a terrific story.
It’s a part of a larger story, but a part that I think stands alone pretty well.
I’m glad she’s the one there instead of me. I’m not fond of surface goo, yuck! Great six!
Neither is Coralie!