Another snipped from my work in progress, Rescue Operation. This is a continuation from last week.
“I want a look myself,” Buck said, “but it sounds good. We’ll need you big guys to do the prying. Tod, you and Tammy keep watch on the road and let us know where they are. If anyone asks, you’re hunting strays. Probably hitting their transport’s too much to hope for, but we can try. Maybe trigger a small slide across the trail just beyond where the flood will hit.”
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I’m engrossed with this story. Loving it.
Hey Sue! Love the six! Hope you have a fantastic Sunday!
Intriguing six….looking forward to what you have saved up for us next week!
Who are they trying to rescue? Themselves? Someone else? Interesting.
Oh, and *contest entry*. I’ve wanted to read Homecoming for awhile. 🙂
At this point, it’s more who’s going to need rescuing. Remember that from the Confederation POV, these kids are terrorists.
Great story…every six sentences count.
Interesting six. Very intrigued by this.
A great six. Interested in seeing what happens next. Thanks for sharing.
A subtle but still well-defined tension. The build-up is proceeding nicely.
Can’t wait to read what happens next!