Continued from last week.
She reached for the piece she had bumped into, and dragged it close enough so that she could put it carefully on top of her little fire, where the flames could lick at the few dry curls of bark. Once it caught, she dragged half a dozen more branches back on hands and knees. Finally her sense of urgency eased, and she shook out the air blanket, wrapped it around herself, and lay down as close as she dared to the fire.
She ached all over, she found once she was no longer moving. For a while she kept reliving the day – the sudden cutoff of Roi’s mental voice, the shock as she struck the cold river water, and her frantic efforts to protect her head as she was carried helplessly through the rapids. She could not remember dragging herself out of the river onto this bar, and she must have lain here for hours.
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Another great six! This story sounds really good. Now I know she dropped into an icy river. Can’t wait to read more.
uh-oh, sounds like a spot of bother xx hope she’s okay! Fab six xx
That was a lot of information in only six sentences! Nice!
Another great description of her survival.
This sounds great!
Beautifully written description.
Ooh! I am intrigued, that’s for sure. Tales of survival, as this seems to be, always tug at me. Hard. 🙂
I love all this survival conflict. Very tense.
This was incredibly intense. Great six!
Ah, so that’s what happened…
Readers of the book will already know how she got into the river and separated from the others: it’s what she does next that’s important to the overall plot. This scene is almost over, though. Not sure if I’ll pick another scene from Tourist Trap (maybe continue with Amber?) or go to my WIP after next week.