Following on from last week’s.
Fire-making supplies, fishhooks, reflective air blanket. Fire-making supplies. Driftwood. She could build a fire. Only to do that, she would have to move, and she was so very tired. So much easier just to lie down and rest.
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No don’t rest..build the fire! Fantastic six!
Another great six! Don’t want her to sleep or she may never wake up!
Very believable six! Nice cover on the book!
Oh no! BUILD THE FIRE!!!! Eep! Very interesting six!!! Thanks for sharing!
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A.
Thanks for your comment on my blog. You have written a whole book! i am impressed (and a bit jealous…) Am your latest follower on twitter!
Ah, the temptations of sleep when you’re just so cold and tired… this is a really interesting story so far 🙂
But, I was a little confused… was driftwood also in the emergency pouch? The other things I can see ’cause they’re small… but driftwood seems too big… You might want to change the beat of that (like, ‘With the driftwood, she could make fire’), otherwise the way it’s formatted, it seems like everything’s in her pouch together.
She bumped into the driftwood two weeks or so back, but it didn’t mean anything to her until she realized she had fire-starting materials. I’m putting the whole scene on my author website as I put it on SSS, so if you need to catch up, it’s there.