Immediately following last week’s six sentences.
The need to be doing something drove her to hands and knees, and she dragged herself slowly away from the water. She gained a body length, and then another before she collided painfully with something sharp-edged, further scraping her sore jaw and narrowly missing an eye. Her hips collapsed sideways until she was half sitting, held up only by braced arms. After a moment she managed to rock back enough to raise one arm and examine the barrier.
Driftwood, she thought hazily. That should mean something.
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I feel as if I’m there with her. Excellent snippet.
Beautifully described and intriguing at the end. Well done! Thank you.
I’m enjoying reading snippets of this story every week. Very descriptive, I can feel her pain. Can’t wait to read more!
Ouch! Love this six!
Feeling her fatigue and desperation.
This is getting more and more intriguing each week
Scary, vivid, and skillfully summons up a dangerously border-line state of mind. She needs a lot more presence of mind than she has right now. Nicely done.
So very visceral. Excellent job!
Such great description. I can feel her exhaustion!
Amazing description. Great six. 🙂
This is intriguing. I had to go back and read your other weeks to find out what was going on. Scary and unsettling!
I realy like this story