More from Tourist Trap, again following right after last week’s. Six sentences is very short this week–several 1 word sentences.
No moon to help her see, and no faint lingering of daylight, either. “Roi?” she called out anxiously. “Timi? Flame? Penny?” Only the soft rush of the river water answered her.
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A perfect sense of isolation!
~Xakara
Dawn’s Early Light 6SS
Ooh, spooky!
Nice sense of rising fear 🙂
Wow. You really get across the feeling of aloneness.
Great six! I can feel how alone she is.
total sense of her being alone. Nice
Uh-oh. Nobody’s out there. Scary in six, and I’m wondering what happens next.
No one around to help. I can feel the fear in her voice
Those short sentences definitely increase the tension. I could feel her panic. Good job.
I like that you put a link to the previous SSS because the flow of them work much better when you read them together 🙂
Oh crikey, I’d be freaking out if I were her and couldn’t see a thing! Great snippet!