Again, this is a bit from Tourist Trap, which should be out soon. The final proofs are in my hands — uh, on my computer.
It was an even race, over the distance. Timi had the advantage of sheer strength and power, but Roi was more agile and his endurance, always better than Timi’s before his paralysis, had finally returned. The trail had been engineered for the sleds and curves were gentle, which favored Timi, but by the time they burst out of the trees Roi was closing the gap between them. “I won,” Timi gasped, collapsing onto a downed tree.”
“Another twenty strides and I’d have had you,” Roi replied. He, too, was breathing hard, but he stayed on his feet, flipping off his forcewebs and walking in circles on the gravel bar where they had stopped.
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Congrats on having FLEs in hand and ready for release! Can’t wait to celebrate with you!
~Xakara
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Great race! I could picture it clearly. Congrats on your upcoming release!
Interesting snippet, great stuff!
Great Six! And a big congratulations, I’ll happily join the toast. Ax
Great six! Good luck on the release.
Nice six!
Great description, I was right there with them.
Action packed and tense. Great six!
Conrats on having the final edits. Totally intense action packed snippet
Congrats on your soon to be released, New Release!